WOW! That was an amazing way to take the destiny and fate of reboot and twist it harder. I loved it. The fact that you got both reboot and TOS in one story and pulled it together and tied it all back to the movie was a neat maneuver.

The shuttle tossing tentacle sea squid was hysterical. Especially when Jim was recounting the tale to Bones. McCoy sent lube? Perfect! I almost spit crystal lite at my screen.

The fact that what we thought was a first encounter between Ambassador Spock and Jim in the movie was actually a second encounter and it was the first encounter that set the epic T'hy'la relationship in motion for Spock Prime so he could return the favor later was a mind grinder. I mean the time travel paradox you created is amazing. How do you DO that?!

I know I am being greedy but this SO needs a sequel. I need to see the fruition of meddlesome "Selek's" labors to keep Jim alive in this time line for Spock. I wanted the story to go on and for both puppies to get a grip, cut the old man a break and move out of denial and have at it already so Prime would not have a breakdown or anything else deemed by Vulcans as "undignified" LOL

So, I will leave my epic rant of *SQUEE* right here with a not so subtle request for MORE! Great Job!