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Title: Just a Jealous Guy...
Author: [livejournal.com profile] 1lostone 
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] jademac2442 
Pairing: Bones/Jim
Warnings: jealousy, angst, FDA approved fluff, kidfic, possible overuse of italics and exclamation points.
Summary:  Bones had never really realized just how manipulative his ex wife was. Or just how jealous he could really be.
Word Count:  A metric fuckton 15,000ish
Status: Complete

A/N:  Merry Christmas [livejournal.com profile] jlm121 !!!  My very first time writing this pairing. A thank you for introducing me to Jim/Bones  and forcing encouraging me to read it. (Although it STILL feels like Jim is cheating on Spock... hehe.)

PART I  PART II  PART III  PART IV  PART V  EPILOGUE


 

EPILOGUE

“—So, Jim, you know him, right mom? Captain James T. Kirk? Well, he swore that if daddy made him wear white that he would burst into flame or something. Winona let me find the spot. It was beautiful mom, a nebula that, like, cast this whole incandescent color over everything, shining through the windows of he observation deck. I even wore a dress. Can you believe it?”

Jo took a deep breath, catching a glimpse of Jim kissing the top of her daddy’s head, giving him a cup of coffee. Her dad, deep into his PADD, looked up for a moment, catching  Jim’s eyes and pressing a light kiss on the inside of his wrist.

Gross.  They were like … rabbits or something. Jo shuddered delicately, quite firmly putting that image out of her mind.

“—So, anyway. I’ll be sad to leave them. It’s been great being here on the Enterprise while they rebuilt down on the planet. I’m really excited about finally getting to start school. I’ve been studying like crazy. Pavel’s been helping me. He’s so awesome, mom. Totally cute and great and like scary smart.”

(Jo, intent on her comm., completely missed the way her dad choked on his sip of coffee,  or the way Jim’s eyebrows completely disappeared into his hair, wicked grin lighting his face.)

“Tell Clay I said hi. Oh, and I just have to thank you.”

Jo paused, glancing under her eyelashes over at her daddy and stepdad.

“I mean it, mama. If not for you, I don’t think daddy would have ever gotten around to being with Jim. I don’t think I’ve ever seen him this happy. And to think, it’s all because of you!”

She ignored the sputter of laughter behind her.

“Night mom. Love you…. Bye!”

 

 


 

THE END

 

 (Bonus if you can guess all the eps of TOS TAS TNG and the films I stole borrowed lines from.)

 

Hee! I hope you liked it bb. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!  

Date: 2010-12-24 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jlm121.livejournal.com
THANK YOU SO MUCH
THANK YOU SO MUCH
I LOVE THIS FIC

I am so sorry I strong armed you into Reading and LOVING KIRK/BONES.
(He hehehe, and I loved pimping it to you profusely.)

I love Jo
I love Jim
I love Bones
I love KIDFIC.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU

THIS IS LIKE THE BEST PRESENT EVER

Date: 2010-12-24 03:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
YOU'RE WELCOME. YOU KNOW YOU ARE LIKE SUN AND RAINBOWS DIPPED IN PORN FOR ME.

hehe

also, I MADE YOU HAPPY!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!

Date: 2010-12-24 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bandearg-rois.livejournal.com
Holy... your first time writing Jones you say? Are you absolutely sure? Cause this is totally awesome and amazing and I ♥ you so much for falling under the spell of the Jones... I think I busted a lung laughing at the end, hurt my heart from the beginning to about the time Jo told Bones to have dinner with Jim, melted at the UBER-HOT of the NC-17 portion, and then busted a gut and d'aaawwwed like nothin' else when Jo walked in... then busted my lung, as previously mentioned.


You are awesome!

Date: 2010-12-24 03:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
Aww, thanks so much! Yep. I wrote a little drabble, but nothing very substantial. I'm more a k/s girl ... usually. :D Thanks soooooo much for reading and beings so nice and your lovely comment and all. <3!!!

Date: 2010-12-24 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bandearg-rois.livejournal.com
<3 to you too!

Date: 2010-12-24 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
Here on an enthusiastic rec from [livejournal.com profile] jlm121, and I really enjoyed this! Your Joanna was quite a spitfire -- I laughed over something she said when she walked in on Jim and Bones, something about Zefram's butthole? :-P Bones really was a dick to Jim (saying they weren't friends? Ouch), but he was more than paid back by the agony of having to listen to Jim and Joanna down on the planet without being able to do anything. *hugs him* Glad he and Jim finally used their words and had smokin' hot sex. ;-)

Date: 2010-12-24 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
*flails around like a ginormous flaily thingy*

THANK YOU SO MUCH! I can't believe you commented on something I wrote. Yeah Zefram's butthole. That made me hee when I wrote it so I'm glad someone picked up on it.

Date: 2010-12-24 04:27 am (UTC)
avictoriangirl: (xmas sandwich)
From: [personal profile] avictoriangirl
EEEEEEEEE! If I hadn't already loved you, I would now. You wrote Jim/Bones! *flails* And it was angsty and fluffy and porntastic. BASICALLY IT, AND YOU, ARE AWESOME. ♥

Date: 2010-12-24 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
hehehe. Thanks! I didn't know you liked them too! I'm busily working my way around basically all the fic, ever. :D

Tough job and all that.


Glad you liked it bb and mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm jim and bones sammich. :D

Date: 2010-12-25 04:36 am (UTC)
avictoriangirl: (kirk/mccoy kiss)
From: [personal profile] avictoriangirl
*boggles* What do you mean you didn't know I liked them too? I only made the now legendary J/B kissing manip! *points at icon* Hell, I love them as much, if not more than K/S! Oh! Have fun catching up with all the fic out there, bb. I have a rec post if you ever want to check it out. :)

Date: 2010-12-25 04:02 pm (UTC)
avictoriangirl: (1lostone love)
From: [personal profile] avictoriangirl
Aww. *hugs you* Will knowing that I recc'ed this story on my rec list make you feel any better? :) ♥

Date: 2010-12-24 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Lovely, thanks.

Date: 2010-12-24 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading!

Date: 2010-12-24 07:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sayfray.livejournal.com
Your Joanna is a firecracker! I absolutely loved her, very well done. And Bones and Jim! I admit I've had fights with my husband and he with me where we think the other has done something without talking it out until we have blundered enough to pull our heads out of our asses. To me this whole thing was very life-like, I loved it! I hope you write more Jones! Because this fandom is awesome of course.

Date: 2010-12-24 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
I think I will be writing a lot more. Mostly because thinking of Jim and Bones all naked puts me in a very happy place. heheh Thanks so much for reading and taking a chance!

Date: 2010-12-24 09:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damaskrose32.livejournal.com
Oh this Joanna is precious! And I'm glad Bones got his act together and realized what an jerk he was being to Jim. This story is sweet, angsty, hot, and hilarious by turns. Loved it!

Date: 2010-12-24 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
hehe. thanks!! Thank you so much for commenting and reading. I'm glad you found it funny. That's always a nice bonus, too.

Date: 2010-12-24 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darlapr0duction.livejournal.com
This was my first K/M fic. The pairing has never really appealed to me before, but as you wrote it I decided to give it a try. WOW!!! I'm so glad I did. I loved this story. There were so many parts that had me laughing-out-loud. Joanna was a little gem. This will not be my last K/M read. Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful Christmas.

Date: 2010-12-24 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
Awww, Thanks. I know what you mean. I'm a diehard Sporker. Only... sometimes my mind. It goes places. Like having Bones and Jim go at it like ..erm

wait sorry I got distracted. hehe.

You have a great Christmas too, bb. Thanks again for reading and being so nice in your comments.

Date: 2010-12-24 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vivid-moment.livejournal.com
Ohhhh ... my!
*Guh*

*Gurgle*

This was just ...

Wow.

Date: 2010-12-24 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vivid-moment.livejournal.com
Oh, and I really hope you write more JIm & Bones again sometime ;)

Date: 2010-12-24 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
wow I broke you!

Sorry about that... make sure you get put back together by the time I manage to finish another one... :D

Date: 2010-12-25 09:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vivid-moment.livejournal.com
You sure did ;)

Oh no, me likied :) OMG! ... *quickly wraps myself up in sticky tape and glue*

I love that you're doing another <3

- oh and I adore your icon, is it snaggable?

Date: 2010-12-25 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
Sure! I don't remember which one but I probably ganked it from someone else.

Date: 2010-12-27 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vivid-moment.livejournal.com
Aaw, thank you. Have ganked it, credited it ... using it :DDDD

Date: 2010-12-24 04:48 pm (UTC)
northernwalker: (Default)
From: [personal profile] northernwalker
I love evil endings, and this is perfect! Jocelyn is probably fuming so hard it looks like a volcano erupted in Georgia.

Date: 2010-12-24 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
HAHAH I love that image. I know fandom is split whether or not she is evil or what, but basically any woman that would ( via canon) screw around on Bones deserves it. :D I really was quite rude to her... hehehe.

Date: 2010-12-24 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yesterday-girl.livejournal.com
Well...let me think....do I like this fic..???

FUCKING HELL YES! FRICKING AWESOME!

Plus yay for you finally giving in to the pull of this pairing. One which you must write again very very soon!

*Plus I lov ehte epilogue - so hilarious! Up yours Ex Mrs McCoy - serves you right for been such a bitch to our dear Bones and Jim! KARMA IS A BITCH!

Ahem....well I'm just saying is all!

Anyway...perfect pairing, loved the characterisation, sexy, angsty, did I say AWESOME ALREADY????? HAHA

Yep - another hole in one by Jess. :0)

*personal cheerleader beigns*

GIVE ME A J! J!
GIVE ME AN E! E!
GIVE ME AN S! S!
GIVE ME ANOTHER S! S!
WHO DO WE HAVE?
JESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*shakes pompoms in the air madly and bounces up and down for joy before doign the spiltz* *then checks myself into hospital for groin injuries* ;0) hehe

Date: 2010-12-24 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
HAHAHAHAH omg this. you.

Of course NOW I'M IMAGINING YOU IN A CHEERLEADER SKIRT.

:D
Thanks, hon. I know you win an award for listening to me flail and bitch and freak out, but you are the bestest cheerleader EVAR!

Date: 2010-12-25 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jachelle0627.livejournal.com
This was totally wonderful. I love your Joanna, Jim and Bones, but my absolute favorite was Jim's kick ass Mama. I love the relationship Winona and Jim have achieved as adults in this story.

Date: 2010-12-25 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karmic-fic.livejournal.com
soooo........ i've been feeling kinda out of the jim/bones zone for a while now, still been watching the comms and saving fic for some future date when i'll be *cough* jonesing for it.... but when i saw it was you that had written it i knew i had to give it a shot, and i'm glad i did cause it was LOVELY

thank you so much and have a merry christmas!!!

Date: 2010-12-26 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bleu-eyed-ace.livejournal.com
OH MY ZEFRAM'S BLESSED BUTTHOLE, I LOVED THIS SO MUCH. OMZBB. I don't even have anything to say other than YAAAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA!

Date: 2010-12-26 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ksalterego.livejournal.com
oh wow, this is awesome! joanna is perfect, bones is perfect, jim is perfect! i love the conversations and interactions, they feel so real. super duper stuff!

Date: 2010-12-26 06:01 pm (UTC)
siluria: (ST_K/B_OTP)
From: [personal profile] siluria
Clearly the moral of the story is never to underestimate a McCoy... no matter what the age :) Awesome fic!

Date: 2010-12-29 11:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] half-vulcan.livejournal.com
Great Story. After a re-watch of Trek 2009 I recently got into this pairing. You did a great job and I LOVED Johanna McCoy!

Date: 2011-01-19 03:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weepingnaiad.livejournal.com
Fun read! Even though Bones was quite an asshole for assuming so much and not hearing Jim out, it was slightly understandable in the way Jocelyn had done him before (and the way she strongly hinted when she told Bones).

Loved Jo! She's Bones' kid, so no way should anyone underestimate her.

Date: 2011-01-24 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joirerson.livejournal.com
What a loserpants I was, never commenting on this! I found it again in a rec post, oh what a nice surprise! Something about the angst and the UST was deliciously done, and then the UST was wonderfully resolved. Wonderful!

Date: 2011-01-24 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostoneficspot.livejournal.com
aww thanks so much!!! I'm so glad that you liked it, bb.

rec post?! REALLY???? *jumps excitedly from foot to foot*

Date: 2011-01-24 05:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joirerson.livejournal.com
Right here, bb! ;) Avictoriangirl likes your stuff. ;) You're even number one!

http://avictoriangirl.livejournal.com/165543.html#cutid2

Date: 2011-02-01 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] therumjournals.livejournal.com
Yay! You wrote Kirk/McCoy! I'm so proud! I love it! Oh McCoy, you hot little rain cloud of grouchy doom.

Date: 2011-02-17 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostone.livejournal.com
HEEEE. Glad you liked it bb! I'm just gonna totally coast off of this comment for oh.. ever. :D

Date: 2011-02-15 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hubcapspecial.livejournal.com
You always look grumpy. You’re like a rain cloud of grouchy doom.

Oh Bones. You are always grumpy. Loved this story! I too found it from [livejournal.com profile] avictoriangirl's rec post. LOVED all the snark and Joanna and Jim and Bones and EVERYTHING. I definitely laughed out loud a bunch of times. You got their voices down pat, especially since you said this was your first Jim/Bones fic. Really well done!

Date: 2011-02-17 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostoneficspot.livejournal.com
Awww, thanks so much for saying such nice things! I love these two. I had to figure that Bones would have a daughter who was freakishly intelligent... :D TY!!!

Date: 2011-03-21 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flatliner345.livejournal.com
OMG, I can't stop laughing! This is perfect!! It's sweet without being too sweet, and angsty without getting you down too much! Also, Joanna is awesome!!

Date: 2011-04-25 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mistress-fatale.livejournal.com
Love this fic I've read it twice since you've posted it!

Date: 2012-02-12 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadowclub.livejournal.com
I loved this fic! It was rather emotion driven without being over the top. In addition, I really loved Jo and how you described many of the other characters in here!

Date: 2012-02-12 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1lostoneficspot.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading! I tend to be pretty emotional, but I didn't want to turn either of them into too much of a wuss. :)

I'm glad you liked it bb!

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